3rd October

This is after we have finished our preliminary, we received constructive criticism from the other groups and the only real point that was put across was our obvious continuity error which we already knew about which in our eyes is a great success. One thing that sir did pick up on is that in our middle scene of Sav sitting at the table, our camera shot was a bit long so in the future we will aim to add more variety of shots in. I think we did 90% of things well as it all flowed, the music fit and I think our storyline worked well so we will also look to do a lot of things the same as we considered it to be a great success